Intuitive Brainiac | Copywriting Alchemist :: Transforming big WHY into content that Connects, Resonates & Converts for Maverick-preneurs.
Niching Contest Participant Comments:
8.5 – Super cool, on point, and I love maverick-preneurs, as you’re speaking directly to your audience, the copy and image makes it really clear to me what you do and who you do it for.
7.5 – Really like your look! I’m a little lost on the “big WHY” line (maybe I’m just totally missing something) but am totally drawn in by the term “Maverick-preneurs.” I’m also passionate about alchemy and all that implies so love your title (my own business is called Alchemist Eating.)
9 – I am hit by your can-do attitude! Maverick-preneurs – this word will attract folks who think they are, and screen out the rest, that may or may not be a good thing. . .? The creative wording tells me you are smart, tenacious, you take the words I give you and make magic with them. Your picture works the “sass” factor nicely, but I’m missing some connection to writing. I would insert “your” – Transforming your big WHY . . . it tells me you will make the essence of what matters to me and my clients permeate all content. Nice.
9 – This is awesome – love both the titles. There’s something I can’t (yet) pinpoint that keeps me from liking it more (awesome design, too – totally on-brand.)
9 – Love the use of “big WHY into content” (not enough businesses do that) and your audience definition as “maverick-preneurs” (which I very well might be). Image gives us an idea of your mindset and approach.
9 – The only change I would make – and I don’t know if it would fit the character limit – is to call out the Maverick-preneurs at the beginning and then use second person – I transform your big why into content . . .
10 – What I like about her big WHY is that it goes to the emotion of why someone would want this. If I can’t say my WHY, my content won’t connect. I love this one. I would jump up and down to have her services!
7 – The part I like are “connects, resonates & converts”. That’s very to the point, and you show that you have the skills. English is not my mother tongue, so I don’t know to what extent this applies, but I have problems with understanding the words “intuitive brainiac,” “copywriting alchemist” and maveric-preneurs.
10 – Love this! Can I sign up for your list?
Ling Wong’s Reflections:
Thanks Tad – For me, the big WHY is the mother of POV
The Revised Niche: