I give creative pro’s the opportunity to be re-inspired, to create and to rejuvenate in a rustic rambling Irish Castle.
Niching Contest Participant Comments:
9/10: Um, could I please come tomorrow?! It sounds dreamy and immediately attracts me. I do find the wording a bit clunky, I wonder if you could use the term “retreat?” As in “I offer creative professionals a retreat to re-inspire, to create and rejuvenate . . .”
Sounds really intriguing, though I’m not completely sure what that actually means. Do I stay at a castle with you? Is your service the castle stay or something you do with me or for me at the castle?
7.5/10: I’d like to know a bit more exactly what this would do for me?
8.5/10: Only because I am unsure of what kind of creative pro’s. I know we are all creative beings but with the work you do, is it for creative business pro’s, artists, authors, musicians, etc? I can envision the castle though. Dreamy!
8/10: Sounds awesome! Agree that the sentence just needs some grammatical tweaking. Awesome business concept.
8/10: Sounds lovely! But what kind of “creative pro’s” are you looking for? Writers? Painters? Architects? Actors? I’m not sure who to send your way.
7/10: I sorta see what you do, need more info.
8/10: I’m intrigued. But then I wonder if any creative professional income can afford it, or if you are targeting highly successful creative professionals (not starving ones). If they’re looking to be re-inspired, are they burned out? Do you provide the location only? Or do you also provide meals? Do they get the whole castle to themselves? Or is it more like a bed and breakfast or a hotel?
9/10: I like it. I’m ready to move in! But where is it close by or in Ireland?
7/10: Seeing this, I have more questions than answers which means it needs to be more clear.
I’d love I’d you included something about having a retreat/time to work on their projects. That just sounds so appealing and rejuvenating for the soul.
Sybil Cope’s Reflections:
Thanks for all the fantastic feedback. I am so thrilled you have all been so constructive and encouraging. We mainly have visual artists and writers coming but we are open to anyone who needs a retreat for time to work on their projects.
The Revised Niche: