Help women who feel inadequate about their bodies commit to a serious upgrade in self care, boost strength & confidence.
Niching Contest Participant Comments:
8/10: It’s clear who you serve, and what they gain from working with you. I think inadequate is a great word, but it seems funny here. I don’t know if I would say change the word, or change the words around it though.
10/10: Love it!
9/10: I almost don’t care how you do it, but then I would. But that explanation can come later.
9/10: Love it, agreed with just a couple more characters, I would claim it more powerful.
9/10: Good clear statement. I would prefer “I help women. . .” to make it more personal.
It feels like this message alone starts to do the work she is offering! Good work!
Hi Chelsea. What amazing and fabulous work! I love your wording, it is very clear and compelling and I get a strong sense that you are effective in doing what you say you can do.
Chelsea Coghill‘s Reflections:
The Revised Niche: