I coach creative, ethical entrepreneurs, to take practical actions to birth their vision, stop dreaming & start doing!
Niching Contest Participant Comments:
7/10: Concise and I get it. I love stop dreaming and start doing but the rest seems too much like stuff I’ve heard before, not unique enough to grab me I guess.
10/10: I feel enthusiastic and excited to see your message! I also like the choice of your words – we can dream, but can we take practical action in support of it? And I am interested enough to want to go to your website and learn more!
5/10: It sounds like there’s a disconnect between what your people want to do and what they’re doing. I want to hear something about the nature of what’s hindering them, or something unique or specific about how you help.
7/10: The who is clear (but it might still be narrowed a bit more). The outcome is clear, more or less. But I’m not sure why they would be seeking you out. What problem are you helping them to solve? Are they “stuck”? Are they procrastinating?
Iona McArdle’s Reflections:
The Revised Niche: