I style high achieving women to help them love the way they look & skyrocket their confidence to command the attention & success they want.
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Niching Contest Participant Comments:
To me, this is super-clear (and makes me almost wish I were a high-achieving woman who cared about what I wore. . .) I love “skyrocket” as the verb with “confidence” – really matches the message of achievement and success. You’ve packed a lot into 139 characters!
9 – Your ideal client is very clear through text and visual. Your services center around image? I’m not super sure what it means to “style” someone, but I assume it means clothing, makeup, etc. Does it include more? Voice? Overcoming gremlins? But I think the word “style” is still adequate and also magnetic because intriguing. I was a little lost by the active “I style” and then the “to help them. . .” I would like to your wording be more punchy. (Whoa the first time I read this as you style folks into looks they love. Now I see it’s “love the way they look.”) Love the way you look, Skyrocket your confidence. Command attention. C-Suite success. Just playing with words!
I love everything about this! No critique at all! Also, as a newer entrepreneur/business woman, I am so intrigued that I am headed to your website to learn more now!
I love this one, too! I took the word, “Command” not a demonstrative statement, but as a natural, “of course it would” kind of thing (does that make sense?) And I have a question: Both Tad and Elfriede weren’t clear on what was meant by “high achieving women.” Since it was clear to me, I’d like to ask them (or others), how you might clarify it more! Thanks in advance!
9 – Great choice of words; skyrocket, command . . . to go with those stiletto heels. Great picture of you too. I also “wish I were that kind of woman.” Interesting how many of us are here . . . hippies, I guess.
10 – Me too, Sarah! Almost makes me wish I were that type of woman. This is crystal clear. It is well articulated, powerful, and the visuals back up the statement perfectly.
10 – I love this and I am NOT your ideal client – I would be dead in those heels within seconds – from a broken neck – probably without even trying to walk 🙂
10 – Fantastic, super clear, and I think high achieving women is a really clear message too. You know if you are one, and you also know if you want to be one, in which case it appeals to both the already, and the on their way to being.
Wonderful representation of your talents. You will need a large diary. Xxlinda
10 – The imagery and branding are great!
10 – Great image and message. The words; skyrocket and command are so well thought out.
8 – The golden high heels are wonderful. Words which are not immediately clear in this context for me are “high achieving women” and the word to “command” attention. I would rather just “get attention”, not necessarily “command” it. Although, it does fit some notion of tough which the shoes also convey. I also like the “love the way they look” part. Very clear. And congratulations on the logo!
9 – It’s all very clear and I love your image/branding. The phrasing feels off to me. I guess with that few characters, there has to be a lot of “ands.”
10 – 10. Super clear. Nice job!
Josee Brisebois’ Reflections:
Yay Thanks Tad! I will think more on the high achieving women part. . . I think I’ll go with women in the public eye (or women in the spotlight?) What do you think!?
The Revised Niche:
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