I help sensitive, high-achievers get centered, access their wisdom, and take right action toward their life purpose.
Niching Contest Participant Comments:
10/10: Joy to world! Very clear purpose.
Could it be “high sensitive over achievers” maybe? That even more niching and narrowing down. If you include medicine in your work I’d say to also include it in the copy.
Joy is AMAZING!
7/10: I want to know more about what makes you different somehow. There are a lot of life coaches. My expectation is that there’s something about you or who you serve that makes you special or even spectacular, and I don’t know what that is from seeing your statement.
6/10: Who you help is really clear. I know several folks who fit into this category. What I don’t know is when I would send them to you.
7/10: Ok that’s me, I get who your targeting but what you do to exactly with your clients I get no sense of it here. Also not sure about the term right action.
8/10: Who you help is clear – heck, I could even be one of your audience. But. . . It isn’t clear why I would want to come to you or when I should seek you out. Is this something we can do over the phone? Or face-to-face? The outcome is quite clear – perhaps focus on one or two of them so then you’d have characters to expand the problem you are helping to solve.
Joy Caffrey’s Reflections:
The Revised Niche:
I have 20 years experience in energy medicine with which I help sensitive, high achievers get centered, access their wisdom, and take right action toward their life purpose.