Launch Time: Working together to build harmony between life and your financial plan.
Niching Contest Participant Comments:
8/10: Fun, playful and attention grabbing. It’s not quite clear yet but close. Maybe something like “are you launching a new business? Let’s work together to build harmony between life and your financial plan so you can fly.”
8/10: Sense of humor, human perspective, financial [sic] planning. I’d check out your services. In my experience people who are good at math, statistics, analysis, and whole systems thinking are frequently the worst spellers. However, people who catch the misspelling might not consider it a plus, like I do.
7/10: Love the play on words very fun but I think you could re-work the “launch time” bit. Time to soar maybe? Definitely dig the message but agree with the other poster about being careful with the details. Punctuation, capitalization and spelling are all subtlety conveyed in your message.
8/10: Launch time? How do I do that? I like the fun aspect!
8/10: Really like the one. Someone to add some lightheartedness to financials.
“Lunch time: working together…etc.” I thought: hey, that’s nice, during lunch meetings we can arrange my financial planning. But that is just me, hoping it would be done quick. What I miss is a description of (ideal) client and what results I could expect.
Kevin Gebert‘s Reflections:
The Revised Niche: