A Transformative online course in Getting Shit Done to deeply engrain the habits and skills needed to be productive and relaxed.
Niching Contest Participant Comments:
5/10: I would give this a 5 because I think you’re halfway there. Love the image and the straightforwardness. But I don’t know who you’re talking to. It starts out so straight forward with: “getting shit done” then loses me. It is like trying to mix “down home-no bullshit language” with spirituality wording. I think it would sound better to be more simplistic.
7/10: I love it, but what kinda shit? Business, online, housework, or everything?
7/10: I love the “getting shit done” statement. I can’t even describe how much this totally speaks to me. The rest loses me. I was all excited about the first part, then it just loses energy and gets all generic and vague. However you word the last part, needs to have the same directness and punch the first line does. It needs to keep the attention of us folks.
9/10: Direct. To the point. Let’s get shit done. 9 out of 10 from me
9/10: This procrastinator digs it. I should probably take your course.
8/10: I love the first half as it has a very strong impact – how can anyone ignore that?! I would just like to see the results (the last line) with the same impact as the first half of your statement. I think it’s great! Best of luck.
5/10: I love getting shit done, and I use that phrase all the time when describing what I do. But who are you helping? I see the niche only indirectly — those who lack habits and skills, who are tense and unproductive — yet I don’t see a kind of person who I could refer, which is an important test.
3/10: I understand what you do, but have no idea who your target audience is. Who is it that needs to get shit done?
6/10: Main question for me is who is your target audience for this?
8/10: What kind of people is this meant for – just anyone who wants to learn those habits and skills, or someone more particular? I like the picture and it has a pretty good impact.
5/10: What you offer as an outcome is clear to me. I’ll get things done, right? You don’t mention the who or what kinds of problems you might be most helpful with. I don’t think you need to mention the how so extensively when there so many people who would be happy just to get shit done — whatever it takes.
7/10: I love this picture and the font and the whole vibe of the wording with everything else. the only thing that is fuzzy to me is who it’s for. So a business owner, executive or mom of 5 kids all want to get shit done, but how they will go about it will be totally different. Unless your message is that universal, but then it wouldn’t really be niching! All the best to you!
The Revised Niche: