Astrology for those who want to take destiny in their own hands and find meaning and healing in trauma
Niching Contest Participant Comments:
8/10: I like it, it’s specific. Lots of people need to heal trauma and this is a new angle on it. 8 just because I’m not your target group.
10/10: I love this.
7/10: I like how empowering this sounds. I am very curious how astrology can offer healing from trauma. I will give it a 7 as destiny feels like future and trauma sounds like past and so it seems like maybe you are addressing 2 different groups/niches. I think it would flow better and tied the 2 together if perhaps you wrote the “meaning and healing (from) trauma” before “and take destiny into their own hands.”
9/10: Finding meaning and healing “IN” trauma still catches me up. I think subconsciously it makes me think I have to revisit and hang out in the trauma to heal. . . which doesn’t sound appealing. . . could you say “from” instead?
7/10: I’m quite clearly not in your niche. . . It’s clear that you work with people who feel somewhat empowered already (“take destiny in their own hands” – this is just not resonating with me at all) but I think the last phrase needs some wordsmithing. . . “find meaning and healing in trauma” suggests that they re-explore the trauma and use it to heal. Perhaps you mean “find meaning in – and healing from – trauma”.
Michael Moon‘s Reflections:
The Revised Niche: