I help coaches struggling to launch a business discover the secret to having a wildly successful profit-making machine!.
Niching Contest Participant Comments:
4/10: Would want convincing of why you are the woman to make me a profit making machine.
10/10: Love it! I know many people in this niche.
7/10: I don’t feel you in the statement feels like a corporate slogan a bit. Too good to be true sounding with nothing to express what its about. But clear niche.
8/10: “Discover the secret” – somehow I’d like it to be more solid, worldly, to be sure it sustaines profits over years.
Sorry, sounds boilerplate and too general to me. But I’m a methodical buyer, strategy oriented, and not a tactics kind of person. I might be the polar opposite of your right client.
Patti Obrist‘s Reflections:
The Revised Niche: