I work with time-trapped, Manic Mums who want more – more time, more confidence, more sleep & ultimately more from life!
Niching Contest Participant Comments:
7/10: It’s clear to me what the desired outcome is, but I have no idea how you would help or what exactly you do.
6/10: Not sure what you do to help.
6/10: How do you do it?
7/10: I know you are certainly selling to me, but I am unclear on WHAT you are selling me. You can’t possibly be selling more hours for my day . . . could you??
8/10: I know two moms I could refer to you immediately, based on the message!
I would think that time-pressured moms don’t have time to find and invest in this service! So yes, as above, I would wonder how adding another thing to the plate is really going to help. Also, wanting “more more more” isn’t something I think that most people want, it sounds greedy. They maybe just are giving “too much too much too much.” so it’s like what can they stop giving away instead of wanting more of, if that makes sense.
5/10: With all due respect for mums everywhere, this is a 5 for me. The mum’s I know (along with most people in the normal world) all want that. What I’m not seeing is how you solve the problem.
7/10: i think “time poor” mum’s could relate to it and as i myself can relate to it as a Time Poor grandma helping two time trapped mums who are my daughters.
8/10: This reads as awesome and right on target for busy mums trying to do it all!
8/10: I give it an 8 too because I know a lot of moms like this and who I am betting would get it.
7.5/10: All mum recognize this. I’d like to read what results you offer.
10/10: I love the message. Clear as a whistle.
8/10: I’m not sure about the terms “time-trapped” and “manic.” unless manic is really referring to bipolar? But as a mom, I definitely want more good quality sleep, and more from life is the perfect way to sum it up. Sometimes you just get lost in your role as mom, it seems like there’s nothing left for yourself. Really great. I like it.
9.5/10: I think I need your services! Only reason not a 10 is that I’m having to presume what the precise service is, coaching I’m guessing?
6/10: I’d like more clarity on what you’ll be helping me with? coaching I suppose?
9/10: I certainly can picture who your avatar is and what you do.
8/10: I like the message, very clear whom you serve, and I’m sure there are LOTS of women who’d relate to it!
9/10: This sounds very intense as if the moms you help are on the verge, they are trapped and manic and needing more. I think your services could be a lifeline when it gets that overwhelming. Plus I love the word Mum.
Wendy Curran’s Reflections:
Wow! Thank you for all that amazing feedback — so useful for me! My passion is for mums (and others, but especially mums) to enjoy life more. To take time for themselves to rest, re-energise and invest in themselves. It’s too easy to lose yourself as a mum and give give give all the time. So I use Mind Calm to help mums change their relationship with their mind and live more in the present moment. I use Mind Detox to help discover and resolve the hidden unhealthy beliefs that are limiting life enjoyment and success. And I use Holistic Therapies to soothe tired, tense bodies, giving the mind an opportunity to quieten. As a mum myself, I know how it feels to loose yourself within your mum role. To feel guilty for taking time out to rest. I’ve learned the hard way what can happen when you don’t take time. It is my aim to work with other mums before they reach the crisis stage I was at several years ago. The challenge for me is to squeeze this into that short statement. Any thoughts, ideas or suggestions are most welcome. Thanks again.
The Revised Niche: